I saw this map on the pubs awhile back and figured it had a lot of potential to be good, with the right edits. I've made a few small changes and put it on servers. Try it out and let me know what (if anything) should be changed to make it better for pug/league play.
I'd post some screenshots/videos right now if I had the time at the moment, but it's now on all servers so check it out for yourself!